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Posted On 07/21/2008 20:21:56 by babybat

tears slide down my face
as i, with a blade, apoun my arm,trace
trace the words that hont me "SLUT"
on the other "CUNT"
the words play in my head over n over
i dig the blade deeper n deeper
i close my eyes n hope ill get a vist from the reaper

the pain becomes stronger
my head becomes lighter
and my eyes become heavier
this pain is stupid but it feels so good
his laughter echos in my mind
his touch makes my body tingle n i now no im his forever
im his slut im his lil cunt
i will never be able to escape from him
he hurt me but i love him
he hates me but h still fucks me
im used im beaten n im trash

the tears disapear
the pain goes away
the bleeding stops
but the scares on me n in my mind remain



okay i have no idea wat i just wrote i just started to write wat do u think

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From: Vampire_Princess301
07/21/2008 20:55:56

Woah. This has an great amount of feeling in which it shows wanting (clearly), hopeless surrender to another (wouldn't have it any other way), and strange love/lust. I like this a lot. Though the spelling was...er...off, but still understandable. I give it a great rating overall, but also an awesome rating due to the quickness the creation was made.




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