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unknown love
Posted On 07/21/2008 20:21:00 by babybat

unknown love

night falls, moon rises full
and my heart turns me into a fool
for now its time
that you my love shall be mine
first kiss is an explosin
first hug is to much of an emotion
your eyes are like a full moon
your voice with each word is like a perfect tune
when i first layed eyes on you
my heart skiped a beat
i didnt know what to do
when you had frist began to speak
your beauty almost knocked me off my feet
to nite your mine
towarrow im yours
we shall be together till the need of time
who are you no one knows

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June 19, 2008 - Thursday

untitled

as i lay in bed
the image of your face swims in my head
thinking about you doesnt allow me to sleep
all i really want is for us to meet
i've seen your face and read your letters
but not have felt you touch
or have heard your voice
it dirves me insane
it causes my heart so much pain
thou does not know thy true
   fellings for thee
but i shall soon set them free

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From: babybat
07/21/2008 21:09:22


Vampire_Princess301 wrote:


These are really brooding love emotions, obviously. I love the way you rhyme in your lines and it seems as if it all flows together. Rating: Very Good/Awesome



thanks for the comments i write the poems fast n dont look over them so that way they have the real emotions that i had when i worte it thats why i misspelled stuff haha



From: Vampire_Princess301
07/21/2008 20:59:42

These are really brooding love emotions, obviously. I love the way you rhyme in your lines and it seems as if it all flows together. Rating: Very Good/Awesome




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